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2017年2月18日雅思A类大作文范文解析

2017-02-23

来源:环球教育整理

小编:Jennifer 780
摘要:2017年2月18日雅思A类大作文考了科技类话题,环球教育宁波学校童驹老师为同学们详细的解析此次雅思考试A类大作文以及范文欣赏。

2017年2月18日雅思A类大作文考了科技类话题,环球教育宁波学校童驹老师为同学们详细的解析此次雅思考试A类大作文以及范文欣赏。

Some peoplebelieve that developments of technology are making life too complex, and thesolution for everyone is to accept a simpler life without using technology. Towhat extent do you agree or disagree?

这是一道“纯粹”的科技题,说它纯粹是因为以往的科技类话题通常都会具体到某个方面,比如说互联网,机器人,太空科技,甚至还会具体到某类科技对生活某方面的影响,比如说通讯科技是否让人失去面对面交流的能力,看电视用手机是否让人失去想象力等。而18日的这道科技题给出的就是一个泛泛的概念,一定程度上是降低了题目的难度,因为可以让我们自由地思考任何跟科技有关的内容。

这道题一个比较偷懒的写法就是写科技带来的好处和坏处,但是这种写法很容易写出跑题的内容,因为题目不是单纯要求写利弊,而是“complex”。如果你写的好处包括便利,效率等概念,那当然是跟simpler是相关的,但你写的好处如果是让生活有更多选择,效率提高让人们可以做更多其他事情,那么扣题度一定不够,甚至会被认为是离题,因为这些概念更像是让生活变得更复杂的论据。

另外一个让这道题提升扣题度的角度是,直接回答题目的问题:放弃使用科技是否会让生活变得简单。所以回答科技的好处和坏处,和放弃科技的好处和坏处是有差别的,这其中的逻辑差异希望大家可以好好体会。

It is true that technology has made our life more complicated in some respects,but I do not think staying away from technology is the so called solution,because this suggestion cannot make our life simpler, and it has failed totaken into consideration the various ways in which our life has become much easier because of technology.

One complaint about the complexity of technology is that it may not be easy to master the use of new technological products in the first place. Although Iagree that the process of getting proficient in how to operate a new machine or set up a new program can be time-consuming or even frustrating, I do notbelieve that stopping the learning process can really make things easier. Instead,if one is willing to endure the initial discomfort, one can enjoy the convenience and ease that are inherent with the new inventions.

It is also argued that technology has made life more complex by creating a range of problems that were virtually nonexistent in the pre-technological age. Among these, the most prominent one is perhaps environmental pollution brought about by the emissions of various machines. However, it is not practical to mitigate these problems by simply giving up the use of vehicles and industrial machines.Even if every human being can be so environmentally conscious as to willingly return to a primitive lifestyle with fewer carbon emissions, how can we possibly meet the demands of the large population in terms of housing and food without the efficiency provided by technologies?

Infact, the problems created by technology have to be solved by further technological progress. For example, we should try to establish the use of alternative sources of energy such as solar energy and wind power to replace fossil fuels which are the main culprit of global warming. Similarly, we should also further develop network security technologies to combat cyber crimes.

Manycity dwellers long for a pastoral life where they can stay away from the hustleand bustle of city life deriving mainly from all sorts of technologicaldevices. While I believe that staying in a tranquil village for a few days can be enjoyable, I doubt how many of us can genuinely do with an extended period when there is no Wi-Fi or TV available.

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