2017.8.26雅思写作高分范文+重点词总结

2017-09-04编辑: Eileen来自: 环球教育

  Task-2: (难易程度3 ☆ ☆ ☆)

  Full-time university students should take a lot of time to study, but it is also essential to be involved in other activities. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

  教育类话题

  【注意】

  题目都是opinion,即都需要论证

  (1)should spend lots of time on study --- 现在并没有做到

  (2)should get involved in other activities --- 现在其他能力也没有培养起来

  宝宝老师范文:

  Is it true that many university students seem to lollygag during their university life? The answer is obvious and I side with the speaker, because fierce competition in the society requires integrated talents who are better equipped with not only good qualifications but also social skills and life skills.

  ■Lollygag 虚度光阴

  ■Integrated talents 复合型人才

  ■Be better equipped with 更好的具备---

  Today, it has been observed that many university graduates have failed to find a well-paid job and  some even have become jobless, simply because most of them have not shown professional expertise which they are supposed to have. In fact, studies have shown that most students subconsciously take university life more recreative as the payback of their hard work in high school. They do not concentrate on what they are going to learn as much as they did in high school. That is probably why I agree that to better adapt themselves to the competition in job market, they are expected to devote more time and energy to the study.

  ■Devote --- to --- 贡献

  In addition to having good qualifications, university students also should develop their social skills and life skills. In China, given that most students, born between 1980s and 1990s, are the only child in the family, they are more ego-centered, having no sense of sharing and collaborating with others, not to mention to be fully tolerant with errors and mistakes of others. Besides, most of them have been chronically dependent on their parents, meaning that they are far less than competent to make their own life. Taking part in other activities, such as doing social service and interviewing professionals in unicorn companies by group work, will definitely and unquestionably enhance their communicative competence as well as develop their teamwork spirit.

  ■Ego-centered 自我为中心的

  ■Be fully tolerant with 容忍---

  ■Be chronically dependent on 习惯性的依靠

  ■Unicorn companies 顶尖企业

  ■Enhance communicative competence 加强交流能力

  In conclusion, confronted with the upward competition coming in the future, university students are expected to make themselves better prepared, not only to be able to apply what they have learned in the university, but also to demonstrate their social as well as life skills. Therefore, they are supposed to spend lots of time on study, and also to be actively engaged in other activities.

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